Writing

Writing

In term 1 we wrote a Andy Griffiths story. My story was about a backyard disaster. I was in Mr Graham's and Miss S's group. They did a plan about the Andy story and the board to help us but then let us do our plan and write the story. Miss S gave us a editing card so we could edit our stories. It was one of our first stories so it was a bit of a challenge. Heres my story:

In term 2 we stared learning about formal and informal letters. We wrote formal letter to company with a complaint or to inform or just to congratulate. I wrote to Smith's chip to inform them that they gave me a chicken chips pack in a salt and vinegar box. In our informal letter we wrote a letter from war to our families back home. I wrote my letter to Mum and Dad. I found that writing a letter is easy than writing a story. Here is my formal letter:

Here is my informal letter:



In term 1 we wrote a portal story and in term 2 we wrote a portal story. In term 1 my main character got teleported to the year 3000. He had a bit of trouble finding his way out of there. He found a portal at the museum. That was the first story we. It was really hard for me because I didn't have many good ideas. In term 2 my main characters got sucked into the pool and teleported to the year 3010. They have to try and find some source of food or money to stay alive. They get jobs and lie in there boss's house. One day they are watching TV when there is a flash of lightning and they got teleported through the TV and back to the year 2010. My second portal story is a lot better because I have added a lot more detail. Here's my term 1 portal story: Here's my term 2 portal story: This year I have learned how to do a good plan. Last year we learned how to do a plan with 3 paragraphs. This year though we have started doing 5 paragraphs. In editing we put red lines under words we think are wrong. We proof read our work then fix up the spelling mistakes. I need to put more effort into my editing. Top of Form  none

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